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What is it?'s avatar

"confirming my body,

ignoring my state."

So good!

Sam Oldman's avatar

Thanks! I appreciate this.

Keiichiro Iwamoto's avatar

Sam, thank you for another wonderful poem that gave me so much to think about. No matter how much technology advances, our humanity and the freedom of our hearts can never be measured by numbers or data. 😇

Sam Oldman's avatar

Thank you for sharing your reflection on this one, I truly appreciate it. I think you nailed it here, data doesn’t reach the meaning. 🙌

Michèle Breton's avatar

Beginning to learn how dystopian life begins! Well written! ✨

Sam Oldman's avatar

This just might be how.. Thanks Michèle. 🫶

Alicia's avatar

Uncomfortably drawing nearer.