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Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Wow. Wow. Wow Sam!

Loved this so much. The brevity and compression in the lines makes it so visceral and clear in the mind.

The voice over on the track is absolutely perfect too. Husky, female dystopia, part digital part human, took me into a sci-fi world in my mind.

Awesome!

Sam Oldman's avatar

Wow right back at you! Thanks for reflecting on my writing.

I'm always a bit insecure about my soundscapes, since I rely on Suno to make these.

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

It works so well.

I was there in a darkened neon room watching a screen fade away. Cursor flickering gently as if it knew what to write before I did.

Sam Oldman's avatar

In this realm, the cursor always knows… 😇

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Yes!

Cassani_Jones's avatar

My new favorite. Thank you.

Sam Oldman's avatar

Really? Thanks Cassani for reading and reflecting. 🫶

Cassani_Jones's avatar

Is is not supposed to be? ; ) I really enjoyed it. It's nice to come across words that were a space of yourself.