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Sam Oldman's avatar

Hi! I appreciate your reflection. Though this description is made up, I think you are right. In it's core, this is how our world currently rolls (an collides) too.

I write dystopian fantasy poetry as a long form series. This post is one of the core realms, that my poetry leans on.

Happy to have you on board, Peter

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It’s strange to read about these three “stable” spheres as if stability can exist without those who step outside the map. What pulls me in is the silence between them—not harmony, but a leak, a place where no one is looking.

Each group seems convinced they’ve “found” themselves simply because they no longer hear anyone else. But silence isn’t proof of wholeness. It’s just distance tightened into the illusion of peace.

And none of them move. The Stoics are fixed, the neurals loop endlessly, the embers freeze inside their chosen rebellion. Shapes without friction. If even one of them brushed against another, the whole order would tremble.

Maybe that’s the real fear here—not conflict, but the possibility of seeing how strange your own choice becomes once isolation cracks open.

Everything in this world rests on distance. Move that distance even a little — and the entire structure shows how thin it really is.

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