The Hush Halo: Systoics - Part One (S125)
This is powerful! "you rested in painless safety" chilling line!
This was one of the first ones and still one of my personal favorites really. I enjoy the wordplay and the worldplay with contrast.
I have been following your poetry book club. So proud of you, I really love the idea.
https://kassiwilson.substack.com/p/welcome-to-the-club
Beautiful!
🙌
I loved the audio. And the words. Made the hair on my neck stand up. In a good way.
Thanks Jay! You have strong writing too, nice to meet you here!
That's very kind of you to say.
A cage that lets you see no more...
Awesome!
What KJ said. 💖
Ugh digging this so much
I'm just there listening, just waiting for the melody to break, then...
"By the time
you noticed,
you had not lived
in years."
I love how you chose this bit for the melody, pairing it with a realization. That's when you break out of the spell.
👏🏽
Stellar, I feel your groove 💋
This is powerful! "you rested in painless safety" chilling line!
This was one of the first ones and still one of my personal favorites really. I enjoy the wordplay and the worldplay with contrast.
I have been following your poetry book club. So proud of you, I really love the idea.
https://kassiwilson.substack.com/p/welcome-to-the-club
Beautiful!
🙌
I loved the audio. And the words. Made the hair on my neck stand up. In a good way.
Thanks Jay! You have strong writing too, nice to meet you here!
That's very kind of you to say.
A cage that lets you see no more...
Awesome!
What KJ said. 💖
Ugh digging this so much
I'm just there listening, just waiting for the melody to break, then...
"By the time
you noticed,
you had not lived
in years."
I love how you chose this bit for the melody, pairing it with a realization. That's when you break out of the spell.
👏🏽
Stellar, I feel your groove 💋