I.I Paradise Beyond Pulse · Hush Halo · S0125
This is powerful! "you rested in painless safety" chilling line!
This was one of the first ones and still one of my personal favorites really. I enjoy the wordplay and the worldplay with contrast.
I have been following your poetry book club. So proud of you, I really love the idea.
https://kassiwilson.substack.com/p/welcome-to-the-club
Beautiful!
🙌
What KJ said. 💖
Ugh digging this so much
I'm just there listening, just waiting for the melody to break, then...
"By the time
you noticed,
you had not lived
in years."
I love how you chose this bit for the melody, pairing it with a realization. That's when you break out of the spell.
👏🏽
Stellar, I feel your groove 💋
Thanks Jay! You have strong writing too, nice to meet you here!
This is powerful! "you rested in painless safety" chilling line!
This was one of the first ones and still one of my personal favorites really. I enjoy the wordplay and the worldplay with contrast.
I have been following your poetry book club. So proud of you, I really love the idea.
https://kassiwilson.substack.com/p/welcome-to-the-club
Beautiful!
🙌
What KJ said. 💖
Ugh digging this so much
I'm just there listening, just waiting for the melody to break, then...
"By the time
you noticed,
you had not lived
in years."
I love how you chose this bit for the melody, pairing it with a realization. That's when you break out of the spell.
👏🏽
Stellar, I feel your groove 💋
Thanks Jay! You have strong writing too, nice to meet you here!